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CommentsI LOVE the first panel! It's so gorgeous and...magical-like 8D
Awesome comic and I can't wait for more c: -- moved to ~Kelcey Thanks!
-- "We have doomed the Wolf not for what it is, but for what we have deliberately and mistakenly perceived it to be.. the mythologized epitome of a savage, ruthless killer.. which is in reality no more than a reflexed image of ourself." Wow thats amazing work Kovie!!
-- ~When I first saw you, I was afraid to meet you, When I first met you, I was afraid to hold you, When I held you, I was afraid to kiss you, When I first kissed you, I was afraid to love you, Now that I love you, I'm afraid to lose you..~ This looks quite beautiful! The music is well-suited
I'm still amazed that you do this with a mouse 8O -- What will people think when they hear that I'm a Jesus freak? What will people do when they find that it's true? I don't really care if they label me a Jesus freak. There ain't no disguising the truth. ~DC Talk I think the first and last panels are my favorites; that eye is awesome.
There are a few spelling mistakes in the first panel, though. O: "Forboading" should be "foreboding" and "challange" should be "challenge" -random nitpicking- -- "But with a sudden clutch he gripped up two of my men at once and dashed them down upon the ground as though they had been puppies. Their brains were shed upon the ground, and the earth was wet with their blood." - The Odyssey What did I tell you about your BG work? Don't start that argument again...you'll lose every time!
But otherwise, I LOVE it! Very nice! I take it you followed my advice on the grass? Beautiful work my friend..Regardless of what you may think of it...I have fallen for the scenery in that first panel...It's comforting somehow...I wouldn't mind a place like that...The narrative is amazing as well..I will definitely keep an eye out for the second page...
I tried to listen to the song but sadly..It decided not to work...Either way..Keep up the good work...I look forward to seeing more in the future... -- The shadow that dances in the flames of the night, the phantom in your hallucinations, I am Rage... Awww.. the song didnt work? was there an error with it ?
Thank you kindly for your warm words *smile* they bring me closer with confidence -- "We have doomed the Wolf not for what it is, but for what we have deliberately and mistakenly perceived it to be.. the mythologized epitome of a savage, ruthless killer.. which is in reality no more than a reflexed image of ourself." *laughs* ya ya, I know, I just had to throw that in there
-- "We have doomed the Wolf not for what it is, but for what we have deliberately and mistakenly perceived it to be.. the mythologized epitome of a savage, ruthless killer.. which is in reality no more than a reflexed image of ourself." The eye is my Fav! *smile* It goes along with "who's eye it is " ehe. Ahhh thanks for the corrections. I will fix those
-- "We have doomed the Wolf not for what it is, but for what we have deliberately and mistakenly perceived it to be.. the mythologized epitome of a savage, ruthless killer.. which is in reality no more than a reflexed image of ourself." |
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